Bad John April 24th 2013, 9:29 pm
Send me a message with stuff you want edited. More than likely, y'all will want me to change some stuff on my most recent chapter.
I took some big risks, in terms of character, on this one. I REALLY hope you like them and they pay off, but I will make changes if need be.
Backstory on the base:
Marie: A strawberry blonde woman in her late twenties. She wears safty orange clothing and goggles that she uses when soldering. She's a bit snippy, and will be easily annoyed or flustered with the new arrivals.
Saffore: Jordan's nurse. She's african american, wears scrubs, and has a pony tail. She has a bottomless well of kindness, and never hesitates to comfort people. She only ever gets angry when someone she cares about doesn't live up to their potential, or someone gets hurt while taking a stupid risk.
The Base: A moderately sized mobile complex. In terms if interior, think of the flying base in The Avengers. It is capable of ground and aquatic transport, and is shaped like a massive steel aircraft carrier with retractable wheels.
Staff: 20 scientists, 120 technicians, 60 security officers, 15 doctors including Saffore. Other people in the complex include patients and robots. It is a very advanced hospital that dabbles in the treatment/empowerment of meta humans. It is headed by a mysterious benefactor that few people speak with named Marilyn Rico. Even Rico's gender is unknown to most people.