The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

ya what if he was 5'10" and you cant tell how old he is and think he is older and isn't allowed in the simulator and he hacked in and changed his age

The angel of hope wrote:no he was a year old when he escaped reach then 17 years later he is a spartan in training

1 year old in 2552.

Add 17 years to both.

18 years old in 2569.

im sorry i read fast and i miss some stuff sorry Manny im very very very sorry

The angel of hope wrote:im sorry i read fast and i miss some stuff sorry Manny im very very very sorry

No need to feel sorry. It's alright. Just take your time reading things, no need to rush.

hay shad im working on another part and i think in needs only a few changes

Okay, send it to me in a PM and I'll check it over.

there i sent it to you

Just checking in, letting you see the armor as it is now.

He's got a nice taste in colour choice!

Black and Red Master Race!

i asked him to do those colors

The angel of hope wrote:i asked him to do those colors

Well when I said "him" I meant your character.

Ok Friday is when I'll get on I like the colors they are awesome

Ps: I'm doing this on a mobile device

Shadow dun gud.

ya he helped a lot and he is making me a picture of my armor he is very nice man hope he never leaves you need to reed my characters file

Sure will. In exchange, will you use periods more often?

deal

Doctor Jensen wrote:Sure will. In exchange, will you use periods more often?

lololol. Oh you.

Manny wrote:

Doctor Jensen wrote:Sure will. In exchange, will you use periods more often?

lololol. Oh you.

Just call me, El Diablo.

Anways, Shadow, that's looking really good.

Took me two nights to complete, but he's done!!





As with all requests I do for people, I ask that you save both of the above images to YOUR computer so that I can clear space on mine.

I hope you enjoy it Hope. I put a shit ton of hard work into this.

ok

Guys try not to post anything in the story of hope just parts of the story thank you

The angel of hope wrote:
"Good, now let's get the FUCK moving, eh?!"

Eh, eh? Sounds like one scary Canadian.

Oh one other comment. Mainly about lore and how things go. An Elite would never give themselves a "human name". They'd find it dishonorable for the most part.

The few that would do that would be like an Elite Separatist and they named themselves "John" after the Master Chief... And there's only the very, very small chance of that happening.

so what think it as he is called jackson by teh humans

The angel of hope wrote:so what think it as he is called jackson by teh humans

That would be alright if the humans couldn't pronounce his real name. Like how the English turned the Dutch "Saint Nicholas" into "Santa Claus" because that's what it sounded like and they couldn't pronounce it.

The fact that the Elite referred to himself as such is pretty out of character for an Elite. Even Thel, who has no qualms with humans, wouldn't give himself a human name. Besides Thel is the English translation of his name to begin with. Elites don't actually say "Thel". They have some super crazy language, as seen in Spartan Ops.

This is just the point I think could use touching up. It's criticism, yes, but it's constructive. It will help you keep the story "realistic" in terms of Halo.

I could have a story where all the Brutes have names like "John" and "Kelly", but no one would really enjoy it as much. It's the details that make a story really stand out.

But by no means do you have to listen to me.