Manny wrote:I appericiate your interest in the thread. I really do.The angel of hope wrote:"welcome spartan H96 to the simulations room" O said with what hope think was annoyance
hope said nothing as he stared at the camera and waved his hand as if to say "what ever"
"you are in a covenant base as a prisoner and the 3 spartans are in vehicles" O said waiting for an answer as hope walked in the room
hope typed in his tacpad "I couldn't talk since I was a kid O"
"why is that sir" O replied
"why don't you know what happened to me when i was a kid O"
"they don't tell me anything about the spartans" O replied as if it was wondering
"I'll tell you later so I'm a prisoner"
"yes" O said as if it said it before
"so why am I a prisoner O"
"you where scouting a base and got knocked out by a brute who nine killed"
"who is nine I never heard of him. wait I'll find out on my own who these people are" hope typed fast as a snake can strike
"OK sir ready to join" O said in anticipation to see hopes style
"yes and don't tell the others that I'm joining and stop calling me sir" hope said as the sim started
as the simulation started he sees the sky and seen a cove phantom dropping supply's down and when he looked down he can see that 3 brutes are guarding him one is a chief and his weapon is a gravity hammer the other 2 are the basic loadout his feet are not chained witch is a big mistake for the brutes hope kicked the chief in the spine and he heard a crack and the chief fell to the floor as the gravity hammer hit the floor and sent one flying in to a group of grunts and sent the other in to a ghost that was driving bye and he got hit in the gut and fell to the ground as the chains broke
"This is Blaine. Hi-jacked a Wraith, going to take out important Storm supply depot. Will reserve a single Phantom and make my way to you."
hope was thinking what the hell is this guy doing if hope was right about witch one hes going to there wont be anything left in a 3 mile radius but he needs to get out of here as the brute that was launched in to the grunts started to get back up and hope got the gravity hammer and red plasma rifle haven't seen one of these since the ark
"hello Blaine don't go there if you blow up the supply depot you level a 3 mile radius" hope typed as he was running down the street in plane sight
as hope was running he saw a communications jammer as said to him self "son of a bitch"
and he kept running to the supply depot and hope he was going to beat Blaine there
when hope made it out he tried again to get the message out nothing then he realized that the blast from the hammer messed up his coms he had to stop Blaine be for he gets in a big pile of shit
"hope come in hope" Manuel said in concern
damn it O i told you don't tell anyone he said to him self but Manuel is closer to him so lets see if i can get a message to him
"Manuel we got to stop Blaine" hope typed as fast as he can
"why do you want to stop him hope" Manuel said as he was ready to say I'm an enemy
"if he blows up that depot its going to take out every thing in 3 miles" hope typed back
"oh shit we do have to stop him and why are you typing only" Manuel said in a scared manner
"ask O it will tell you and I don't refer AI's as people" hope typed
as he kept running he heard a warthog and spotted 2 ally waypoints must be Manuel and nine
and they stopped in front of a cliff and hope heard nine say "why the fuck are we stop...
oh an ally who"
"he is called hope you need to reed his file" Manuel replied
hope jumped right in to the passengers seat and almost flipped the warthog and hope thought Manuel said "show of" hope didn't mine that he said that he is always disliked but hope swears he seen nine smile threw his mask
"so we have to stop Blaine before he gets there" Manuel said as he went 0 to 60
"I don't know we have to tell him in person our coms are jammed for 40 miles" hope typed in frustration
"Ok but how are we going to do that when we are 5 mi.." as nine got interrupted by a phantom shooting at the and he returned fire
"i just hope we get there in time" hope typed as he checked the warthog for any UNSC weapons and found one sniper jack, pot and aimed at the gunners on the side of phantom and got head shots on both and shot the big gun off and somehow shot the pilot and the phantom crashed in to the cliff right be side them sending chunks of rock on to the warthog and made them crash in to the canyon next to them and hope was ejected in to a tree and every thing went black
For future reference, it would be nice if you didn't play the role of other's people's characters.
You did a fairly decent job at portraying them though, I'll give you that. Except Manuel would be more annoyed than scared of Blaine trying to blow up a Storm base. He's a dark character like Davy Jones from Pirates of the Caribbean, or Anakin Skywalker/Darth Vader from Star Wars. Regardless, just avoid taking control of other people's characters in the future. This is a collabrative story and there's no rush to finish it.
Anyways, Manuel's plan is to get John/Nine to the Innie base, take it over, get him some medical aid, and establish a place for the UNSC to land.
Think of it like Halo Wars, except it's a wierd game type where to are given a limited number of troops and you have to take over one base.
In the interest of keeping the story thread running smoothly, I'll acknowledge the first part where Manuel and Hope are talking. However the change of plan will not happen.
If look back, I've posted a map. The Storm base and Innie base are on opposite sides of the desert. The Warthog wouldn't have shown up that fast.
If you're stuck on what to do instead of the Warthog scene, you could have Hope meet up with Blaine. Blaine's been kinda lonely...
Sorry Manuel, I had figured I should at least have told him what was wrong with his post. I've gone in and edited some of the grammar mistakes that I saw, and I've also modified some of it to make a little more sense.
It was a great post though, don't get me wrong. I was just confused why the Brute Nine had killed was still alive, long after it was supposedly killed. So instead, I kind of left the two Brutes that were at his side to be the captors.
Like I had said in my post on the story thread itself, the Outpost Blaine is going to blow to hell might cause an explosion, but it won't clear a three mile radius.
And since when did Manuel have feelings of annoyance for Storm dying? I figured he'd like that
.Note: I've edited your post Hope. I hope I didn't discourage you from participating. You did a fine job.
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