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    The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

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    Re: The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

    Post  dragon of darkness on March 1st 2013, 4:42 pm

    the reason i made his name like that is im not going to kill him off any time soon he is hopes partner im not telling you what happens to maliha so i made it easier for the peopl who read it
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    Re: The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

    Post  Manny on March 1st 2013, 4:53 pm

    The angel of hope wrote:the reason i made his name like that is im not going to kill him off any time soon he is hopes partner im not telling you what happens to maliha so i made it easier for the peopl who read it
    It's OK that Hope and company call the Elite "Jackson". Hell, I probably would to if I couldn't say it perfectly.

    The issue is that the Elite said "my human name is Jackson". They don't have human names, and nor would they ever give themselves one.

    If the humans use it or not is the issue. It's the fact the Elite even said he had a human name.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 1st 2013, 5:10 pm

    its just a small detail so what
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    Post  Bad John on March 1st 2013, 5:29 pm

    Manny wrote:
    The angel of hope wrote:the reason i made his name like that is im not going to kill him off any time soon he is hopes partner im not telling you what happens to maliha so i made it easier for the peopl who read it
    It's OK that Hope and company call the Elite "Jackson". Hell, I probably would to if I couldn't say it perfectly.

    The issue is that the Elite said "my human name is Jackson". They don't have human names, and nor would they ever give themselves one.

    If the humans use it or not is the issue. It's the fact the Elite even said he had a human name.
    Manuel is giving you a legitimate criticism.

    Elites are individuals with lives, heritage, and pride in themselves and their names.

    They're no more likely to have "human names" than humans are to have "sangheili names."

    An elite would have you call him by his name, or his rank.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 1st 2013, 5:34 pm

    ok but so what it still a small detail
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    Post  Manny on March 1st 2013, 5:47 pm

    If you want me to be fairly blunt, it's actually not so minor.

    It shows a lack of understanding on who the Sangheili are as a culture and as a people. Which is not a minor detail, and you don't need to be well versed in the lore to know that basic aspect. The entire Halo trilogy was based around the Covenant trying to eliminate everything related to humans. That's a big reason for the glassing of worlds rather than just occupying them. It's also why Elites would rather die in combat than pick up human weapons and survive.

    But as I said, you don't need to edit that one line. Continue on, and I mean it. The rest was solid, and Hope seems to have a reasonable plan.

    Should me and Shadow post anything, or wait for a bit? Where do you plan to meet the "foreign" Spartans?
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 1st 2013, 5:50 pm

    well ill solve this when Jackson explains his story ok
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    Re: The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

    Post  Shad0wChas3r on March 1st 2013, 6:13 pm

    Manuel, you should post Siegfried finally meeting up with Blaine. I don't know where exactly you were located, so I'll assume Blaine's Pelican is waiting there for Siegfried.
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    Post  Bad John on March 1st 2013, 11:04 pm

    When does this story take place?

    I'd like to contribute a bit, if the maestro of the story would have me.
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    Post  Manny on March 1st 2013, 11:45 pm

    Bad John wrote:When does this story take place?

    I'd like to contribute a bit, if the maestro of the story would have me.

    12 years after Halo 4. 2569. Obviously I can't answer the second part.

    ...However that does raise an interesting question from me to you John. How old is Iola by then?

    Spartans were augmented at around the age of 14 by the way. Assuming Iola went through the same procedure.
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    Post  Bad John on March 2nd 2013, 1:49 am

    She was born two years before Halo 4, so she'd be 14.

    Iola gets her implantation at 15, and finishes her training at 18. She wouldn't be in the fight, but she'd certainly be learning, preparing for the augments, and quite bright and opinionated at that age.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 2nd 2013, 5:39 am

    hay john you can join if you want just let me know how you are going to do it ok?


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    Re: The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

    Post  dragon of darkness on March 2nd 2013, 5:31 pm



    this is a map for... well the story of hope

    black rebel base

    purple covve bases

    black with x threw it where hope is

    top left where the blue are where hopes allies are

    the pink in the destroyed moon is a covve ship

    the rest you should know

    hope you like


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    Post  Manny on March 2nd 2013, 7:00 pm

    ...Blaine (UNSC) and Siegfried (Legion) are in the same ship.

    We'll assume that their is a dot in between those two points to represent that.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 2nd 2013, 7:03 pm

    ok ill edit it
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 5th 2013, 10:10 pm

    ok thanks like i saied try to keep the story clear and put anything here thank you
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    Post  Manny on March 6th 2013, 9:29 pm

    A few problems with your post.

    1) Manny is not the guy in the Pelican, if you've been reading the other posts at all.
    2) Where did the plan come from? Hope just asked a question and got an answer out of nowhere.

    Anyways, I'm working on my post.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 6th 2013, 9:31 pm

    i realized that on my own when i read it in my head im like shit thats not manny
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    Post  Manny on March 6th 2013, 9:34 pm

    Yep. My post was almost done when I saw your new post in a tab.

    Siegfried wouldn't let some random Spartans on the Pelican. I don't thnk anyone would. it's more realistic I think. He'd be asking questions first.

    But Blake's marines need to be dealt with first.

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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 6th 2013, 9:35 pm

    im editing my part i realized i messed up badly
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    Post  Manny on March 6th 2013, 9:38 pm

    Blaine never said anything about clearing the planet... Ever.

    Not sure if you caught that.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 6th 2013, 9:42 pm

    like i said im editing it i messed up big time
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    Post  Manny on March 6th 2013, 9:43 pm

    Just making sure.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 6th 2013, 9:45 pm

    there i edited it you might want to edit yours as well
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    Post  Manny on March 6th 2013, 10:55 pm

    I edited in that Siegfried heard the wraith a split second before Hope asked if anyone else heard it.

    Not sure what else to put in/take out. Suggestions?

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