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    The Story of Hope (OOC Thread)

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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 24th 2013, 8:22 pm

    ya what if he was 5'10" and you cant tell how old he is and think he is older and isn't allowed in the simulator and he hacked in and changed his age


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    Post  Manny on February 24th 2013, 8:28 pm

    The angel of hope wrote:no he was a year old when he escaped reach then 17 years later he is a spartan in training

    1 year old in 2552.

    Add 17 years to both.

    18 years old in 2569.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 24th 2013, 8:30 pm

    im sorry i read fast and i miss some stuff sorry Manny im very very very sorry
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    Post  Manny on February 24th 2013, 8:39 pm

    The angel of hope wrote:im sorry i read fast and i miss some stuff sorry Manny im very very very sorry
    No need to feel sorry. It's alright. Just take your time reading things, no need to rush.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 24th 2013, 9:15 pm

    hay shad im working on another part and i think in needs only a few changes
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    Post  Shad0wChas3r on February 24th 2013, 9:24 pm

    Okay, send it to me in a PM and I'll check it over.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 24th 2013, 9:50 pm

    there i sent it to you
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    Post  Shad0wChas3r on February 24th 2013, 10:18 pm



    Just checking in, letting you see the armor as it is now.
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    Post  Manny on February 24th 2013, 10:34 pm

    He's got a nice taste in colour choice!

    Black and Red Master Race!
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 24th 2013, 10:41 pm

    i asked him to do those colors
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    Post  Manny on February 24th 2013, 10:50 pm

    The angel of hope wrote:i asked him to do those colors
    Well when I said "him" I meant your character.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 25th 2013, 7:16 am

    Ok Friday is when I'll get on I like the colors they are awesome

    Ps: I'm doing this on a mobile device
    lol!

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    Post  Doctor Jensen on February 25th 2013, 4:58 pm

    Shadow dun gud.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 25th 2013, 5:00 pm

    ya he helped a lot and he is making me a picture of my armor he is very nice man hope he never leaves you need to reed my characters file

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    Post  Doctor Jensen on February 25th 2013, 5:32 pm

    Sure will. In exchange, will you use periods more often?
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 25th 2013, 5:34 pm

    deal
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    Post  Manny on February 25th 2013, 6:10 pm

    Doctor Jensen wrote:Sure will. In exchange, will you use periods more often?
    lololol. Oh you.
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    Post  Doctor Jensen on February 25th 2013, 7:29 pm

    Manny wrote:
    Doctor Jensen wrote:Sure will. In exchange, will you use periods more often?
    lololol. Oh you.
    Just call me, El Diablo.

    Anways, Shadow, that's looking really good.
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    Post  Shad0wChas3r on February 25th 2013, 8:30 pm

    Took me two nights to complete, but he's done!!





    As with all requests I do for people, I ask that you save both of the above images to YOUR computer so that I can clear space on mine.

    I hope you enjoy it Hope. I put a shit ton of hard work into this.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 25th 2013, 8:30 pm

    ok
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    Post  dragon of darkness on February 26th 2013, 6:16 pm

    Guys try not to post anything in the story of hope just parts of the story thank you
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    Post  Manny on March 1st 2013, 9:14 am

    The angel of hope wrote:
    "Good, now let's get the FUCK moving, eh?!"
    Eh, eh? Sounds like one scary Canadian.

    Oh one other comment. Mainly about lore and how things go. An Elite would never give themselves a "human name". They'd find it dishonorable for the most part.

    The few that would do that would be like an Elite Separatist and they named themselves "John" after the Master Chief... And there's only the very, very small chance of that happening.
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    Post  dragon of darkness on March 1st 2013, 4:25 pm

    so what think it as he is called jackson by teh humans
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    Post  Manny on March 1st 2013, 4:38 pm

    The angel of hope wrote:so what think it as he is called jackson by teh humans
    That would be alright if the humans couldn't pronounce his real name. Like how the English turned the Dutch "Saint Nicholas" into "Santa Claus" because that's what it sounded like and they couldn't pronounce it.

    The fact that the Elite referred to himself as such is pretty out of character for an Elite. Even Thel, who has no qualms with humans, wouldn't give himself a human name. Besides Thel is the English translation of his name to begin with. Elites don't actually say "Thel". They have some super crazy language, as seen in Spartan Ops.

    This is just the point I think could use touching up. It's criticism, yes, but it's constructive. It will help you keep the story "realistic" in terms of Halo.

    I could have a story where all the Brutes have names like "John" and "Kelly", but no one would really enjoy it as much. It's the details that make a story really stand out.

    But by no means do you have to listen to me.

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